Answer the question in Chapter 125.
The controversy is quite explosive, let’s talk about it in a single chapter.
The next three chapters are written immediately after Xiao Feng woke up. After writing one chapter, he continued to write the next two chapters after breakfast. Basically, he posted them directly after finishing writing and had no time to check them carefully.
There is indeed a problem with the description of details, so the subsequent modifications were made.
Helpless ~
If you write quickly, you will inevitably have some details that cannot be taken care of.
After posting, you have to check the subsequent reaction before going back to check, and then see if it needs to be modified.
Mainly sometimes, what the author conceived may not be actually expressed. What may be written is one picture in the author's mind, but if it is another picture on the reader's side.
This is actually the most critical issue in writing, which is the so-called pen strength. The stronger the pen strength, the stronger the control, and the more able it can express what one expected.
If the writing skills are poor, no matter how you write, it will be impossible to write well. It is like knowing what it is, but you just don’t know how to say it or how to describe that situation.
Hot-blooded comics like Naruto Pirates generally reflect the sunshine, sand sculpture, and darkness on the surface. The author usually considers the audience issues, making the "interesting" more than "logical", which is also the reason for many bugs.
Compared with those comics with few bugs, there are very few that are popular.
Xiaofeng's personal brushwork is not very suitable to put aside authenticity and logic, and just write about the sunshine and interesting side, so writing about Naruto Pirate's usual style will add analysis of the plot.
Needless to say, Naruto's darkness is needed. Danzo can assassinate Sarutobi Hinata and get forgiven. Sarutobi Hinata can force Hinata to death... The Hinata village of Mizuno persecutes the family ninjas, and Konoha is also doing this. After the second generation's death, the Chiaju clan fell directly in two wars and no one was left. It is obviously unreasonable to say that the natural development is going on, the Uchiha clan is still doing well.
Moreover, Uchiha was not much better. He was always excluded from the second generation. In the end, he could no longer bear it and prepared to seize power. Then he was wiped out. Hinata was not much better... It can be seen.
By the way.
The plot development of this book is definitely different from the earthquake.
The most troublesome thing about Xiaofeng’s fan writing is that he has written too much. He has almost thought about the plot he should think about. I can’t control the Naruto fan style of my friend next door. This is the most helpless thing.
It seems like I've said a little too much.
Then let's do it first~
Chapter completed!