Chapter 869: Change the script
It's hard to tell clearly the strength of a tough guy...
This person is definitely better than the gangster, and he is much worse than his brother, and he really bullied his sister.
It won't work without fighting, and it will be boring if you fight.
At this point, we can actually highlight the theme of the movie, which is the price!
It's okay to commit crimes, but the price must be paid. A tough guy can fight his brother a few times and give up immediately when he finds he's defeated.
As a charlatan, he should use charlatan methods to solve the problem. He started stabbing his thigh with a knife. When he found that he couldn't escape, he jumped off the building and harmed himself to apologize.
This also gave my brother time to discover the car washer. The character of the car washer died a bit hastily before.
It looks like he was suffocated to death after saying he was high. Add some plot and let him increase his rogue attributes.
After removing that coworker, my brother can ask:
What would you do if it was your daughter who was being bullied? The car washer thought she was trying to extort money and arrogantly stated that she only had two sons.
Strengthen the dialogue and let the car washer show that he does not want to lose money and wants to keep his sister for a long time.
When the elder brother learned that the car washer was bullying his sister and was discovered by the congressman's son who happened to pick up the car, he sold it and cracked the jack again.
In the end, the boss fights with the congressman's son, who is honestly his bodyguard, and the ending is not unexpected.
My sister was rescued from a serious injury. Can I write it in another way?
My brother thinks that the reason why the congressman's son is so unscrupulous is because he has the support of his labor and management behind his back. If he beats the congressman's son, can he also deal with the congressman at the same time?
The climax is here, that’s a congressman!
Being protected was a difficult task even for his brother, but looking at his sister being sent to the emergency room, he decided to do it anyway.
This time, my brother did not deal with the congressman's son directly, but beat him up and took him away...
On the other side, the congressman discovered that his son was missing and started a city-wide manhunt. While he was anxiously waiting for the results, his brother's figure appeared on the building opposite.
The elder brother kicked the congressman's son, who had been beaten into a pig's head, off the building, and stepped on the rapidly descending rope with one foot.
After hearing the reports from my subordinates,
The congressman loves his son very much.
Regardless of others' persuasion, he rushed to the window. The brother standing on the roof smiled slightly and quickly rushed to one side.
Pick up the sniper rifle that was placed in advance and shoot the congressman exposed by the window in the head.
Congressman, die!
The young master was also thrown to death.
After that, he frantically chased his brother. He escaped from the roof of the building and was seriously injured. He insisted on going to the hospital to pick up his sister. When the two drove away, they were surrounded by sirens that resounded throughout the city.
Skynet was restored. The seriously injured brother looked at the unconscious sister beside him and smiled...
The younger sister seemed to feel something. She opened her eyes and looked at her elder brother. She called out softly. The elder brother let go of the steering wheel and rushed towards the water ahead...
Finish.
In the script, the younger sister is described as mentally retarded. How can she go to high school like this? The change is just to soften her intelligence, which is equivalent to the intelligence of a ten-year-old child.
The sister can ask for help when she meets the congressman's son.
I just didn’t expect that the person I thought would be saved would meet a bigger bad guy...
He felt that this kind of plot would be better, so it happened to be time to get off work, so he closed the script and went home. After dinner, he added his own opinions and sent it to Gu Niannian, asking her to help sort it out.
I got up and just went to the bathroom to take a shower. When I came out, I found my phone ringing. I picked it up and heard Gu Niannian's voice on the other side.
"Boss, who wrote this plot for you?"
"What's wrong? Do you feel threatened?"
Ren Xiaowei did not answer the question. After all, the two of them had cooperated once, and they made him money again.
So there is still a good chance for a second cooperation, but now...
On the other side, Gu Niannian was silent and suddenly said, "There are flaws in this script..."
He frowned slightly and asked, "What flaw did you find so quickly?"
Gu Niannian immediately replied this time, "Yes, it's so obvious. It's hard to find even though it's been marked by you."
Damn it, the sole of Ren Xiaowei's foot slipped.
This flattery was too unexpected.
However, he asked Gu Niannian to sort it out again. If you want to muddle through this, you should not think about it; "Actually, we can divide the plot into three parts, so that it can be better during the filming stage."
"Tell me....."
This time he asked directly.
After all, Gu Niannian has had an experience. Unlike him, it would be best if she could contribute some useful suggestions.
"First of all, we can divide the drama into three parts. For example, the supermarket owner's philistineness, the photographer's hypocrisy and cowardice, and the three gangsters' arrogance and ignorance are placed in the first stage. In this stage, we focus on highlighting the sense of revenge.
, write out my brother’s anger.”
"The second stage is to fight with the man and the car washer. You can express your frustration. The man with the fight thinks that the biggest problem is to lose money, so he is not afraid. When an arm is knocked off, his first reaction is that he does not have to pay any money. The previous hard work
The same is true for Shi Nan. He thought that his brother would be done with it if he jumped downstairs to vent his anger, but he didn't expect that he would just escape like this. If he stayed behind, he would still die..."
"Finally, regarding the congressman and his son, my brother is actually almost done with his anger. We can focus on describing it as punishment. Yes, death is just a method used by my brother to punish him!"
"You mean the scavenger?"
"That's right."
On the other side, Gu Niannian's eyes lit up and she said, "Yes, they are scavengers, law enforcers who are outside the law.
Specifically targeting those bad guys who have escaped legal sanctions, or the law has not yet had time to deal with it... In the end, we can also add some elements of openness to our solution."
Just after saying this, he sighed again; "However, if we do this, we probably won't even be able to release it."
Ren Xiaowei was also excited when he heard this, and his intuition told him that the script this time was much better than "Asin".
After all, "Asin" is too niche, and this brother is very popular, so it shouldn't be wrong.
Therefore, he said nonchalantly, "You don't have to worry about this. Just follow the China Film Group's path. If you want, you can invite them to shoot together. You can also hand over the distribution to them. Just make a coat out of tiger skin."
You must know how to take advantage of the situation!”
"oh."
Gu Niannian curled her lips, thinking that it is not so easy for you to borrow someone else's power.
She still doesn’t know that the real momentum Ren Xiaowei is leveraging is the momentum of "Soldier Assault"...
Since December last year, this drama has become very popular, and good military themes have just come out.
China Film, coupled with this general trend, should have no problem.
And this is just the production aspect, like co-investment.
And the results of "Asin" are all their bonus points. Isn't the Speaker just next door?
Just when he thought he was ending today's conversation, Gu Niannian's confirmation voice suddenly came from the phone again: "Wait, boss, can I ask how much you are going to spend to hire me and Qiming this time?"
Ren Xiaowei was a little surprised and said, "Do you think you were given less last time?"
Chapter completed!