Lu Zhiyuan took a step forward and looked at Ning Jiang: "Brother Ning is unwilling to show his poetry in public. Could it be that he looks down on me?"

Others were even more shocked and forced to this point. Ning Jiang either wrote a poem that could compete with "Spring River Moon Scenery" in public, or admitted his mistakes humbly and humbly, and from then on, he became a human being with his tail. It can be imagined that in the future, the circle of "scholars" will spontaneously exclude him.

Ning Jiang smiled and said, "Wait!" He turned around and said, "Xiao Meng, help me buy a fan."

"Oh!" Xiao Meng, who didn't know what his brother was going to do, ran outside to buy a fan for his brother. The crowd gave up a line. Soon, the girl ran back and handed the newly bought folding fan to her brother.

Ningjiang let out a "pop", and the folding fan opened, shook it, and then he smiled and said, "Actually, even if Brother Lu doesn't say it, I'm just thinking." He shook his head and said, "The spring breeze blows the water waves, and the shadow of the toad rabbit falls into the Qianchao River. The puppet sucks the sword and plays with the moon shadow, and the willows blow long eyebrows dance in the spring color. The smoke is vast under the white copper dike, and the fine stamens at the end of the forest are jagged. Peach leaves are seen under the green mulberry branches. Looking back at the heart-breaking clouds... In my opinion, Brother Lu's song "Spring River Moon Scenery" has obvious advantages, but its disadvantages are too great."

Unexpectedly, he not only did not surrender quickly, but instead became arrogant and everyone was stunned.

Lu Zhiyuan was even more angry. Not long after Bao Lao decided the title, he became a poem in seven steps and was directly listed as "Class A" by three judges. Although it was to cause trouble for Ning Jiang, he was quite proud. Unexpectedly, this boy actually pointed out that his poem "has great shortcomings". The implication is that this poem is just ordinary, how can he hold it back?

He sneered, "What are the shortcomings? Please give me advice."

Ning Jiang sighed: "Brother Lu's poem, the first paragraph describes spring water, the second paragraph describes leaves and willows, and the third paragraph describes embankment and forests. Together, it forms the lake and spring scenery, and the conception is still exquisite. However, the fourth paragraph, "See peach leaves under the green mulberry branches, look back at the green clouds and look back at the heartbreaking of the heartbreak', this "Look back at the green clouds and look back at the heartbreaking of the heartbreak" directly lowers the level of the whole poem."

Lu Zhiyuan said coldly: "What do you say?"

Ning Jiang Yaofan said: "The title set by Mr. Bao is extended from 'chun' and 'jing'. Brother Lu wrote 'chun' and 'jing' too deadly, so it was difficult to extend. In the end, he had to forcefully raise the theme, use the scenery to describe the emotions, and put the word 'sorrow'. However, the spring scenery in the front and the last word 'sorrow' cannot be linked together. If this last sentence is not available, it can be considered a doctrine of the mean. Adding this last sentence, it falls into a inferior way. If you want me to evaluate it, it will be seven words... I forcefully talk about sorrow in order to write a new poem!!!"

Lu Zhiyuan's face suddenly turned red, and the others looked at each other and couldn't help but nod. Although Lu Zhiyuan's song "Spring River Moon Scenery" uses scenery to describe emotions, there is indeed a serious problem of separation between emotions and scenery. From the previous three paragraphs of the description of scenery, it cannot be associated with the last "empty heartbreak" in any case.

Lu Zhiyuan naturally knew that he did write the spring scenery too much and entered a dead end, so he had to forcefully install a topic at the end.

However, this is also impossible. Poetry emphasizes the use of scenery to express emotions or the writing is to convey the truth. There is no clear "emotion" or "Tao" as the theme. At best, it is an exquisite landscape poem that cannot be improved.

What's more, the topic of praising old people is to "extend" with spring and scenery.

He really had nothing to say about Ning Jiang's judgment, who was focusing on this point, and this also proves that Ning Jiang's vision of "commenting poetry" is indeed sharp.

Ning Jiang continued to wave his fan and said, "What a pity! What a pity! I have been mourning for my deceased father at home for many years and have never left. Recently, I heard that there were many talented people at Yuehu, so I came to join in the fun. I didn't expect that even such a doctrine of the mean work that was superficial to the snake could be listed as the first class. It seems that this Lantern Festival... is just like this!"

As soon as these words were spoken, they were all in an uproar. Such crazy words, coupled with his cool shaking of the fan, were simply saying: "I'm not targeting anyone, but everyone here is rubbish."

At this moment, not to mention the anger of the crowd, even Mr. Bao, Song Songping, and Cao Jieding, both of them were beginning to lose faces... They were the ones who included Lu Zhiyuan's poems as the first class.

To be fair, Lu Zhiyuan's poem has shortcomings, but except for the few poems that can be selected from millions, which one can be remembered for generations, what kind of poems cannot find shortcomings? As for "strengthly speaking of sorrow for writing new poems", this can be said to be a common problem for talented men in the world. If you put together all the poems, it can be said that at least seven of the ten poems are like this, even when you were young, Bao Lao was no exception.

Considering that Lu Zhiyuan combines spring breeze, moon shadow, water light, willow branches, etc. to form the cleverness of "lake and spring scenery", as well as the description of scenery that is basically unmatched, although there are some shortcomings, giving a "A" can be said to be no problem. What's more, from the question given by Mr. Bao to his writing poems, it is only a short time. Even if he lacks in "learning the scenery to expressing emotions", it is not unforgivable.

Mr. Bao laughed twice, but what he thought in his heart was: "Rampant, really rampant!" Lu Zhiyuan's poem "Spring River Moon Scenery" can be said to be quite good. He has written countless poems in his life, and only a few of them can reach this level.

Song Songping was secretly angry. In fact, how could he not see the problem that Ning Jiang pointed out? But after all, the problems in this poem can be said to be inevitable for most people. Since it is a common problem that everyone cannot avoid, it is naturally ignored. People who can avoid such problems can basically be remembered throughout the ages, but from ancient times to the present, how many poets can truly be remembered throughout the ages?

Even Cao Jie was shaking his head secretly, thinking that it was difficult to deal with it. Ning Jiang's words basically demoted all the talents at the Lantern Festival poetry meeting. In the future, he would not have to mess around in the circle of literati in Linjiang County.

Cao Jie Ding asked Zuo Liangpeng to pretend to be a "expert" to fool Ningjiang, saying that he had great fortune first and then great disaster. Zuo Liangpeng, who was stunned, was still laughing when he returned. In order to make Ningjiang really believe that he would have great disaster in the second half of the year, he moved away his ancestral grave as soon as possible and donated the Little Parrot Island to the government. Cao Jie Ding was thinking about how to create "great blessing" for this kid.

Unexpectedly, before he could bring good luck to this kid, the kid actually caused trouble first...

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