At twelve o'clock in the afternoon, the novel was officially launched.

I sincerely hope that readers who think this book is worth reading and subscribing to support it.

I actually want to know how many people are watching...

When I was watching pirated versions, I basically couldn’t see any comments on the shelves. Later, after I went to Qidian to watch the genuine version, my favorite comments on the shelves were comments on the shelves.

In the novel, I can only see what the author wants to present to readers, but in the comments, there is a living author. I want to see the other side of the author, his discussion of his achievements, his expectations for his works, and his complaints about unsatisfactory...

Now when you open a novel, you will habitually read the comments first. Whether it is the comments on the shelves or the finished comments, these things are more attractive to me than the novels (laughs).

I don't know if you like it or not?

I like the author's words about these things, so I just wrote a little bit of my own thoughts.

Let’s talk about the current situation first:

The novel's grades are actually very poor, but in the final analysis, it's because of the lack of level and the novel is not well written. The author is self-aware of this.

——So for the results, I basically have no hope.

In this novel, I have deeply realized many of my shortcomings, roughly the following points.

1. The most serious defect is the lack of expression ability.

As we all know, writing novels means passing the author's story into words to readers and bringing pleasure to readers.

Unfortunately, I did this poorly.

The words you wrote are far from what you want to express in your mind - the root cause is that your control of words is too rough and you cannot accurately control the quality of your writing.

The most obvious point is the foreshadowing "Dani" laid in "Avatar", which is considered a poisonous point by many readers. This is the reason. The author is not sure about the degree of goodness, which leads to the paving of the highlights that should have become the poisonous point, which is indeed his own problem.

2. Motivation of emotions.

The most important thing to write a novel is to gain the readers' sense of identity and fully mobilize the readers' emotions.

The ideal state is that you won’t feel bored when laying the groundwork. Instead, you will look forward to the situation in the future. Even if the ending is known, you will still be looking forward to it.

Then the climax erupts, creating indescribable comfort.

If there is a defect in emotional mobilization, the plot that should have been ups and downs will become boring, like a diary, and it will be tasteless.

In this regard, I can only understand the flaws, but cannot be achieved quickly. (It is easy to know and difficult to do)

3. The writing is slow and the plot is not compact.

This is an old problem, there is no way, my strength is just like this, I can only keep exploring, constantly summarizing and improving, and strive to do better in the future.

As for other problems, I won't list them one by one.

The current collection of the novel is actually quite good, better than I expected. I also hope it will be put on the shelves. In this way, at least I know how many people will read it again, which can be considered a review of myself.

This is a relatively suitable time to release the shelves, and the plot happens to be at a relatively good node.

The novel is finished, let’s talk about the others.

Writing novels is the only way I can find at the moment. It can not affect my own job and I like it very much. It may change my destiny through my own efforts.

This is something I will like from the bottom of my heart and find it very interesting.

The first three novels were my own attempts, but they ended up being miserable. In the end, they could only find a class to support their lives in shame.

After that, after having a stable job income, I was still a little unwilling to give up. I still wanted to fight. If I don’t fight, I might be mediocre in my life. Although I won’t win if I fight, at least I have a clear conscience and will not regret and blame myself in the future.

As for whether the grades are good or not, it is a matter of ability...

So I continued to conceive in October last year, officially started writing in November, and officially released my book in January.

Very ashamed, I missed again (囧)

But I will still stick to it, at least I have to eat it for a few waves and attend all the time!

Then I looked at the manuscripts - 46 days after I published the book, my manuscripts were reduced from 68 to 16 chapters today.

I found that at my current typing speed, I don’t seem to be able to eat at all the staff. This is embarrassing. (The staff is 4,000 words a day)

Of course, the reason for writing slowly is not because I am lazy, but because I am conflicted by myself.

As a senior online reader and reading works by masters all year round, my eyes are picky (of course, my toxic resistance is also relatively high, and my requirements for works are relatively low.)

But, as an author, I am childish and awkward...

This leads to the fact that when I look at the words I write and cannot express the effect I want, I will be severely stuck - the kind that is even more scary than constipation, and I can't write hundreds of words even if I sit for a few hours.

Sometimes it even takes several days to get one card!

This reason seriously limited my writing speed and made my already difficult writing worse.

Of course, irregular work and rest caused by part-time jobs is also one of them.

Due to work reasons, I can only write at night and maintain a relative reading volume, which has led to my sleep time delaying from 12 o'clock in school to 23 o'clock and 34 o'clock now.

I think there is always one who will come to me if you are fire or sudden death (laugh).

Of course, this is not a complaint. It is not easy for everyone except a few people.

I said this just to express some of my own opinions-(I may not have added any more.)

alright.

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