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255. I'm sorry, you recognized the wrong person(1/2)

March 31, evening.

After dinner, Jiang Miao returned to his cousin's bedroom on the third floor, and continued to sit at the desk to write.

After a while, Su Huaizhao rushed over after dinner at home and asked her junior to join her.

Two people sat at the desk, one was drawing and the other was typing, and Tang Zhuqing was lying on the bed to watch a drama.

Although the situation has stabilized now, the school has not been opened yet, and the same is true for kindergartens.

Tang Zhuqing is currently at home with a paid time, and her daily task is to take an online class during the day, which is much easier than to revolve around the children every day in kindergarten.

But it’s easy and relaxed. Now I have to eat dog food sent by my cousin and siblings in the bedroom two days later. Tang Zhuqing has a little tooth soreness and feels that her stomach has been a little bad recently.

But in fact, when Tang Zhuqing was there, Jiang Miao and Su Huaizhu were still very restrained.

If she knew the interaction mode of the two of them when they were alone, she would have been blushing and escaped from the bedroom.

Despite this, Tang Zhuqing still has a magic weapon to turn defeat into victory, which is to watch "Senior Sister Step on Me!" and "Senior Brother Stop Your Leave a Leave a Leave!" while complaining in real time.

To be honest, this novel and a comic have a strong correlation in essential content.

It’s just that one is from the perspective of a boy and the other is from the perspective of a girl. Although they are all based on the same love experience, the content they write is very different.

Jiang Miao's male perspectives mostly start from the male lead's standpoint, and rarely describes blockbusters through the female lead's perspective, especially the female lead's state when she is alone, which is basically rare.

This involves the problem of readers' sense of substitution. Only by focusing more on the male protagonist can we ensure the consistency of the sense of substitution of the plot.

Second, Jiang Miao really doesn’t know the little thoughts of girls in love. It’s easy to make mistakes if you write more. It’s better to avoid them reasonably and just portray them a little when needed.

Conversely, Su Huaizhu is similar, but because she prefers the female-style style, the junior in the comics is portrayed as a very offensive character.

Although this is very different from Jiang Miao's personality, from many details, you can still find many shadows belonging to Jiang Miao.

This is mainly because when Su Huaizhu was creating, the copywriting outline was carried out under the guidance of Jiang Miao, not the result of Su Huaizhu alone.

After all, Su Huaizhou used to be a full-time painting player and did not study the plot in depth. If it weren't for the content of the comics, she would probably not be able to take up the position of the main painter at all.

"You really haven't had that one yet?" After Tang Zhuqing got along with these two, she had no taboos. After reading Jiang Miao's latest chapter, she ran to the group to read the extras. She found that she had not taken any further steps, so she asked curiously.

"Sister!" Su Huaizhou blushed and told her not to ask such questions.

Jiang Miao also looked helpless: "Don't meddle in other people's business, okay? It's better to think of a way to find a brother-in-law for me to come back if you have this skill."

"Go." Tang Zhuqing curled her lips and clicked on Su Huaizhou's comics again. Seeing that the junior inside was a wall-to-bang, a princess hug and a forced kiss, she immediately aroused her curiosity again, patted Su Huaizhou on the shoulder and asked, "Is this true? My brother treats you like this in school?"

I'm afraid this brother and sister aren't M?

Tang Zhuqing thought so in her heart, but she didn't ask.

"It's all comics, not true!" Su Huaizhou waved his hands repeatedly and explained, "Sister, don't ask... Don't tell me if you're reading it."

Tang Zhuqing just enjoyed this feeling. Seeing these two guys being defeated, she felt sour.

However, she had been following the novels and comics of the two of them, and after reading them for a while, she could only continue watching the show while urging them to update.

When someone is stunned or touches his cell phone and fishes, Tang Zhuqing will turn into a supervisor, raise his feet and poke the man's back, or pick up the orange and launch a giant attack on the man's back.

Orange said that he was very innocent. After jumping off Jiang Miao's back, he lay on the bed again, slumped there and didn't move, just wanting to be a salted fish.

After about 10 o'clock in the evening, Su Huaizhu simply packed up and prepared to go home.

When Jiang Miao sent her downstairs and all the way to the entrance of the yard, he still kept warm.

Tang Zhuqing held Orange and leaned against the window, looking at the pair of figures close to each other at the door of the yard, with a look of melancholy and enviousness in her eyes.

"well……"

Burying her face into Orange's furry belly, Tang Zhuqing sighed, wondering when she could fall in love.

Turning back to bed, Tang Zhuqing threw all her sentimentality behind her. She forgot her worries as soon as she swiped her phone and continued to watch her husbands in the play.

After Jiang Miao finished sending his senior sister, he returned to the upper floor, it was almost eleven o'clock.

Back at the desk, Jiang Miao uploaded the new chapters he copied to the evening. Seeing that it was not too late, he continued to open the outline software and slowly improved the framework of his new book.

At this time, Tang Zhuqing touched his stomach and said to Jiang Miao: "Brother, I'm hungry."

"There are fruits downstairs, so I'll cut them by myself."

"I don't want to eat fruits." Tang Zhuqing said, climbing from the bed to the edge of the bed, and laughing, "How about we order takeout? Barbecue?"

"I ate barbecue in the middle of the night, and my grandmother found out and was going to talk to you again."

"Just say whether to eat it or not!"

"eat."

"Okay!" Tang Zhuqing patted Jiang Miao's shoulder to show encouragement, "Then you go downstairs to get takeaway later."

"Ha, I know."

Jiang Miao curled his lips and had already seen the true face of his cousin.

He is greedy and lazy. He wants to order barbecue but doesn't want to go downstairs to get takeaway, so he has to squeeze my cousin's labor force.

"Come on, what do you want to eat? Sister treat you." In this regard, Tang Zhuqing has always been generous. After ordering what he wants to eat, he handed over his cell phone.

After rushing to this point, I was seduced by my cousin's barbecue and my appetite increased. Jiang Miao was not polite and ordered a lot of orders.

Tang Zhuqing took back his phone and looked at it again. He felt that there was nothing to add, so he clicked to place an order.

It was the most lively time for the barbecue stalls in the evening, and it took more than an hour to deliver food.

Jiang Miao continued to organize the outline of the new book and built the basic framework bit by bit.

Tang Zhuqing saw him typing on the keyboard and couldn't help but wonder: "What's going on today? Is there going to be an update?"

"How is that possible?" Jiang Miao stretched, "I'm preparing a new book."

"New book?" Tang Zhuqing opened her eyes wide, "Then are you going to finish this book now?"

"That's not yet." Jiang Miao shook his head, "I just finished writing the second volume recently, and there are two volumes left behind. I guess I can write it for three or four months."

"So you are starting to prepare a new book now?" Tang Zhuqing looked at him squintly, "Scum, you're two boats."

"The authors who open the doubles all have all of them." Jiang Miao rolled his eyes, "I'm ready in advance. When this book is finished, I can seamlessly connect to the next one. This is more cost-effective in time."

"Then what are you writing about in the next book?" Tang Zhuqing came over curiously and looked at the computer screen. He saw a book title written on the outline title.

"I broke through the daughter of the leader of the Demon Cult"

Tang Zhuqing: "???"

"Cough..." Jiang Miao was still a little embarrassed when he was seen by someone. "The frame has not been built yet, and there is nothing to read."

"You really have you." Tang Zhuqing glanced at the content under her, and the dense small words made her look dazzled, so she didn't look carefully, so she simply asked directly, "What are you talking about?"

"The initial setting is the story of the protagonist accidentally breaking the fact that the leader of the Demon Cult is a woman, and then expanding it with this." Jiang Miao spread his hands and said,

"It's just a brainstorm, and the subsequent settings have not been made yet."

"Then what are you doing now?" Tang Zhuqing was a little confused, "I think you have written a lot of things here."

"They are all different development directions, and the subsequent plot has not been involved." Jiang Miao mentioned this and felt a little troublesome. "There are many things that have to be reasoned based on logic, and then find a relatively reasonable, particularly interesting and beautiful setting."

"I don't understand." Tang Zhuqing explained honestly.

"This is very simple. I will ask you a question, why is the leader of the Demon Cult is a woman, but the Demon Cult has not discovered it?" Jiang Miao asked, "This must give a reason, right? Then I have to give an answer to rationalize it."

"For example, the real leader was defeated, and the fake leader has not been regarded as a few days ago, so there is no flaw in the moment."

"For example, this leader is the child of the previous leader. In order to succeed the leader, he pretended to be a man since he was a child."

"Or it might be the long-term layout of the Zhengdao Sect, allowing the people under their command to sneak into the Demon Sect through disguise and lurking. As a result, this female disciple spent several years to compete for her as the leader."

"Behind each possibility, a different plot line will be extended, and which plot line is more interesting and more intense is the choice I have to make now."

"Tsk..." Tang Zhuqing had a headache just by listening, but still asked, "That's enough to solve this problem?"

"How is that possible?" Jiang Miao spread his hands, "There are many similar questions."

"For example, why did the protagonist break through the leader's daughter?"

"Is it because of accident? That makes this leader seem stupid. He was obviously so successful in disguise, but he was discovered by a small protagonist."

"So a very reasonable coincidence must be arranged so that the protagonist accidentally discovers the true identity of the leader, achieving unexpected and reasonable results."

"It's really troublesome~" Tang Zhuqing couldn't stand it anymore and lay back on the bed with salted fish. "Stop talking, when did you write it out, I'll go and read it."

"You have to ask." Jiang Miao gave her a blank look.

Only after writing the main text of a novel can readers be interested in reading it.

The process of creating a novel may be a pleasure for the author, but sharing the skills and logic with others is like a science student giving calculus to a liberal arts student.

In the online literature industry, a simple mind is worthless, because as long as you write it out, others can imitate it at any time.

For example, the Western fantasy and game articles that were more popular in the early days were mostly derived from various online game settings at that time, and they were borrowed from the brains of online games.

Later, there were trends again and again, such as the Academy, the prehistoric flow, the infinite flow, the system flow, and various schools.

To the increasingly segmented market today, a simple mind can be used hundreds of times, such as Revival of Aura, Cthulhu, Sign-in, Simulator, etc.

Therefore, what an online writer really needs to train is never simply like a good brain, but how to expand an interesting brain to support a sufficient number of words.
To be continued...
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