"Some fantasy, games, and urban books are all at the top of the list," Chen Haotang said, adding, "I have read your new book, too."

Jiang Miao: “…”

The last sentence is really unnecessary to say... Jiang Miao's mouth twitched, and he began to look at the beginning of Chen Haotang.

The total number of words at the beginning is less than 10,000 words, which is not as expected by Jiang Miao. He is writing a game article or a LOL e-sports fan.

After all, Chen Haotang usually practices this game, and it is appropriate to choose this topic online.

But after Jiang Miao browsing it briefly, he could clearly find that the beginning of this article was full of loopholes and could not bear to look at it...

First of all, without saying a word at the beginning, first there is a detailed description of a game game. The first one is more than 5,000 words, and they all write about the protagonist playing a game, which is very intense.

The details are quite detailed, and even the protagonist has added a few soldiers, and the skills and reasons for various positioning during the laning are clearly explained.

But the opponent on the other side didn't know who it was, and they were passers-by who had nothing to do with the main line. After a game, Jiang Miao couldn't help but hold his forehead and sigh.

Finally, I saw more than 5,000 words, and the protagonist officially appeared. There was no introduction. I just simply described the pretext, and I had a lot of trivial matters, and then I started the next game...

The remaining four thousand words are all the details of the second game...

If this is a textual explanation of the game, I have to say that Jiang Miao thinks it is quite awesome, and the description of various details is very detailed, and even the reason why the protagonist operates this way is clearly written.

But this is.

Chen Haotang obviously has no idea about the most important elements, characters and plots.

"Isn't it okay?" Chen Haotang could tell at the look of Jiang Miao's face, "There is no problem, you say, I'll change it."

"I don't know what to say." Jiang Miao touched his head and felt astonished, and he felt like he was teaching elementary school students to learn calculus.

"In this way, I'll ask you a few questions and let's talk about it slowly." Jiang Miao thought for a while, but decided to guide him slowly. "What are the common characteristics of the game texts you read at the beginning?"

Chen Haotang frowned and thought carefully: "All the protagonists are men?"

"..." Jiang Miao covered his face and continued to guide, "Think about it again, what are the characteristics of their protagonists? What are the same plots at the beginning?"

"The protagonists are all very powerful, or have a very powerful system." Chen Haotang concluded.

"Yes, that's it." Jiang Miao continued to ask, "What about your protagonist?"

"My protagonist is also very powerful." Chen Haotang nodded confidently, "And I wrote it very clearly. Why the protagonist is powerful is all in those details."

Jiang Miao: “…”

"Yes, but when you start writing the game, the readers don't know your protagonist at all, so they will not be able to get into your story at all." Jiang Miao said, "So you must first introduce the protagonist and then introduce his special features, that is, what is better than others."

"There are generally two types of golden fingers in game text." Speaking of this, Jiang Miao raised a finger, "The first type is that the protagonist himself is super strong, either reborn and traveling through time, or he is a former champion, retired due to special reasons, etc."

"The second type is that the protagonist awakens the golden fingers similar to the system, and can forcibly improve the protagonist's strength by adding points, skills, buffs, etc."

"Only when your protagonist highlights an advantage over others, readers will feel happy when they take the lead."

"And this advantage must be reasonable and well-founded, not just say that the protagonist is very powerful out of thin air, because it will make readers feel unreal."

"The system is real?" Chen Haotang asked back.

It's not that he argues, but he really doesn't understand.

"It is because the system itself is not real, so readers think it is very real inside." Jiang Miao smiled bitterly, "Of course, there are quite a few readers who are more repulsive to the system, but for newcomers, if they do not have the ability to control the system, the system flow is a more suitable choice."

"Then I'll write the system?" Chen Haotang didn't care if anyone would hate it. He only cared about whether he could write results and make money in this way.

"You can try it, but even if it is a system stream, the plot is still the first priority." Jiang Miao said, "The game text usually has two ways, either a live stream or an e-sports stream. There are also two-in-one streams, but it is usually one main line and one foil. It is enough for you to write one well."

"Then it's e-sports." Chen Haotang did not hesitate.

If he asked him to write content on live streaming, he would definitely not be able to write it. He would be able to play with memes and make up his work. Chen Haotang believed that he didn't have the ability.

"Then the beginning is very simple." Jiang Miao reminded, "First, let the protagonist appear, give him a reason to play e-sports, and then show the golden finger when the protagonist needs strength, that is, the system."

Chen Haotang's foundation is too poor, and Jiang Miao cannot talk to him about something too general. He can only give restrictions and let him write out the qualified beginning first within the established framework.

It's not too late to talk about something more in-depth when he can sign the contract.

If you don’t write many writing skills and kernels, just listen to others and you think you understand, but in fact, only after you actually write, you will find a lot of problems and are waiting for you to solve them.

"Okay, then I'll change it." Chen Haotang nodded.

"Come on." Jiang Miao couldn't say anything else, so he could only encourage him.

At this time, Xun Liangwujue had just woken up from the bed, rubbed his eyes and climbed down from the upper bunk, yawned into the bathroom and went to the toilet. After coming out, he said "huh" and asked Jiang Miao: "

"Brother Jiang, what did you buy?"

Only then did Jiang Miao realize that the express box given to him by the senior sister had not been removed yet.

"Nothing, my birthday gift from my senior sister."

"Birthday gift?" Xun Liang raised his eyebrows and became interested. "Display it open and see what did you give?"

"It's probably a facial cleanser or something." Jiang Miao muttered, took out the scissors to disassemble the express delivery.

"Maybe what safety measures are?" Xun Liang browsed, poked Jiang Miao's waist, and shook his eyes at him.

"What are you thinking?" Jiang Miao gave him a blank look, but there was a little more anticipation in his heart.

The box was taken apart, and Jiang Miao opened it and saw a few big words written on the box inside.

Jiang Miao: "???"

"Damn!" Xun Liang looked closer and was shocked, pointing at the big red Ultraman underwear in the transparent box, laughing, "Hahahahahahahahahaha! Brother Jiang, you have today too!"

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Chapter completed!