1. Results report

First, report on the results.

"Senior Sister, Stop it!" was first ordered at 3,700 yuan, because it took about a week to be released, and the results rose very quickly. By the end of October, it had already ordered at 6,000 yuan.

Then there was a two-month stable period. At the end of December, the editor arranged an introduction, and the current orders were more than 6,400, which was the same as the current orders of this book.

In fact, the average orders for the up owner when the book was completed were only 5,500. Since the book was completed in August, the average orders have increased by about one thousand.

If this is the case, the senior sister's grades in this book have surpassed the previous one, which is gratifying.

However, daily texts are considered the essence in the early stages. Many daily texts become watery in the later stages, and they will be completed when they can't be written. Therefore, the subsequent results will not increase much, or even fall.

This is completely different from the situation where the longer the fantasy fairy tale is, the more popular it is.

So, we don’t have a higher expectation in this book of senior sister. It’s satisfying to maintain the level of around 7,000 before the completion.

If you order something, you can try to get it when your level improves in the future.

After all, many of the people who read my books are students, and the subscription rate of genuine editions is actually not high. Thank you very much for coming to Qidian Chinese for supporting genuine editions.

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2. Content summary

1. Overall framework

The original plan of this book was actually to simply divide it into three to four volumes, and define the content according to the dividing method slowly summarized in the previous book.

But because the pace of the early stage of this book is definitely much slower than the confession at the beginning of the previous book. In terms of the outline, Jiang Miao and Su Huaizhou were together much later than the current text.

However, he was influenced by this chapter in the end, and finally chose to complete the confession plot in the National Day plot.

In fact, according to the most ideal number of words, a whole love article can be roughly divided into three to four stages.

The first stage is an ambiguous period, with the end of two people confessing their love together;

The second stage, the passionate love period, takes the sublimation of the two people's feelings as the end;

The third stage is the wedding period, which ends with proposal, marriage certificate, wedding, newlyweds and honeymoons after marriage;

The fourth stage, the nurturing period, starts with the love crystallization of the two, and can be extended to raising the child to adulthood.

If you want to divide these four stages by word count, the most ideal word count ratio in my mind is probably 3:4:2:1.

If it is a content of one million words, the ambiguous period of 300,000 words, the passionate love period of 400,000 words, plus the marriage content of 200,000 words and the post-marriage content of 100,000 words, I think this ratio is quite perfect.

Unfortunately, they still couldn't stabilize the early stage. When it was about 200,000 words, Jiang Miao and Su Huaizhu were together. In fact, they should have been together at least until the winter vacation.

However, at present, the overall framework has not been wrong with the changed outline, and the completion degree has reached the effect I originally preset.

There are six chapters in the first volume, namely the Singles, the Fake Play, the Gambling, the Real Works, the Winter Vacation, and the Social Death.

Each article is about 80,000 to 120,000 words in length, which is very in line with my small and beautiful expectations.

Actually, I have a little ambition in my heart, and have imagined that this book will be lucky enough to make a TV series or an animation in the future.

Therefore, it is easier to separate the plot into short sections, and each article has its own theme.

Including the three roommates of the protagonist and their respective girlfriends, I have made three relationships similar to the protagonist's templates, which are all content that can easily expand the supporting role branches when adapting film and television.

But just thinking about this kind of thing, it is already very good to order more than 6,000 yuan, but generally speaking, at least 10,000 yuan is required to order more than 10,000 yuan, and there is a chance of copyrights such as film and television adaptation.

Moreover, people who buy copyrights generally don’t look at the content carefully at all. They simply read the results and titles of a book are not good.

For example, what are the top ten monthly ticket lists, the first in the classified monthly ticket lists, the Golden League and Silver League, the Honor one-star two-star, and the out-of-circle index v4v5...

I understand all the tricks here, so I won’t say much. This is why I rarely ask for monthly tickets. Basically, I ask for a guaranteed monthly ticket at the beginning of the month and the end of the month. Just get it.

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2. Specific analysis

The biggest problem with the singles is Su Huaizhu's lack of psychological description. I only realized it when I wrote Chapter 25. I have always focused my perspective on Jiang Miao in the early stage, which has led to some of the senior sister's behavioral motivations being missing, and there are certain logical problems.

After all, in terms of setting, Su Huaizhu is a person who is gentle on the surface but actually polite to others. He will not take the initiative to socialize someone casually.

It is not enough to know that Jiang Miao is a Tao Jiang, but if they do not give some of their high school past, it will easily lead to a logical weakness.

Fortunately, the plot of Jiang Miao's exposure of the vest on his senior sister's early stage was very attractive and overshadowed many problems, so it seemed okay.

Of course, this is still a small problem.

The main plot of the Singles episode revolves around Jiang Miao's social death.

The story of social death is actually divided into two stages in the plot.

As a Tao Jiang, Jiang Miao wrote a novel. When he found that his acquaintance was reading his novel, it was a social death, but it was not entirely true.

The single chapter mainly revolves around this incomplete social death. Jiang Miao knew that the senior sister was reading, Xun Liang was reading, and because of Xun Liang's sharing, the other two roommates also learned about the book.

Among them, the senior sister is the main trunk because the senior sister already knows that Mitao Jiang is Jiang Miao, but Jiang Miao is still stuck in the drum, and this is the second level.

The third floor is until the end of the fake drama, when Jiang Miao discovered that his senior sister was the boss of Chong. After knowing that his senior sister knew that he was Mitao Jiang, she did not expose her for the time being.

Until the last fourth floor, Jiang Miao exposed her boss's vest in front of her senior sister, and the plot reached the first climax of the book.

And it is also the one I think is the most perfect.

The stacked emotions burst out at the end of the fake drama, with four layers of superimposed, and the younger brother's successful confession, the joy of the two being together. I can guarantee this whole plot with my chest, which is definitely very excellent.

If it is a short story, you can end Happyending perfectly here.

But because the progressive emotions of the first two articles were vented at the end, this also made the subsequent gamblers and real-working chapters appear relatively dull.

In addition, I dare not let the two make progress too quickly after falling in love, so I have always kept writing in some aspects.

Unfortunately, although I have been in love before, I really haven't experienced what it feels like during a passionate period, and I can't write many details in place.

So is there any female book friend who is willing to sacrifice her life to help me practice (dog head)

Of course, the architecture of the Gambling Chapter is actually my favorite.

In order to end the debate and the scene where my senior sister kissed her in public and swore sovereignty, I have been preparing various materials for the finals of the debate since the book was opened.

I have been struggling for a long time just whether to write the finals in detail.

But thinking that the previous "confession plot" had already made considerable compromises, so even if I lost the follow-up order this time, I did not give up writing the plot of the finals.

Especially the confrontation between Jiang Miao and Wang Zinc, I have simulated it for a long time, and there are three versions of the confrontation content of the free debate alone.

I always feel that in the Internet era, it is important to always maintain a clear and rational mind. The content of this final is destined to be disliked by some readers, but I just want to write it.

Anyway, I'm happy this time.

In fact, if you don’t write it, the readers will not be able to get the difficulty of the finals at all. It would be very sloppy to say that Jiang Miao turned the tide and lost in the end, and that the senior sister’s kiss would not be shocking enough.

So overall, I personally think that writing this final plot is a relatively correct choice.

As for whether you like it or not, it is a personal sensory issue. It doesn’t matter whether you like it or not.

The real work after that was made was relatively simple because there was no expectation of "confession" and no expectation after the "angry" ended.

The main content of this paragraph is two things. One is that the senior sister continues to change clothes and get materials for Jiang Miao, commonly known as free gifts, and the other is the plot of the debate team going out to rent a house on a Japanese house party.

Because I am relatively dull, I can speed up this part and finish it in about twenty chapters.

After that, we entered the winter vacation and moved from school to home. The changes in the scene brought a new sense of expectation, especially the family, which could build new interpersonal relationships and create new plots.

Especially Jiang Miao’s parents, it can be said that they are full of materials, and I am quite skillful in writing.

The winter vacation chapter can be said to have slightly saved the decline in the previous two chapters, and the downward trend of chasing orders has temporarily stopped.

The ending is the New Year's Eve where the two of them are rushing in both directions.

In fact, the initial outline should be that the two of them went in both directions on New Year's Eve, understood their true feelings, and confessed to each other under the fireworks in the night sky.

Unfortunately, I couldn't hold on at the beginning, otherwise the plot of this section would have been very full, and the accumulation of emotions would have been a very successful climax.

Now it seems that the end of the winter vacation can only be said to be passing the exam, and the minimum plot requirements are met.

The subsequent social death chapter is the overall outbreak after the first five chapters.

It was nothing more than Jiang Miao's death. After the society died, Su Huai's death, and then the two of them died together. It can be said that they are the most suitable couple.

However, the most exciting part of this article is not in the main text, which is a pity, but the overall environment is like this, everyone should be able to understand.

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Three, follow-up plot

As mentioned earlier, this book will be divided into four volumes, and Jiang Miao will write a new book in each volume.

The first volume is the master of the up, the second volume is the senior sister, and the third volume and the fourth volume can speak freely, but I have almost decided the content of the book.

In terms of the timeline, the first volume is from the beginning of freshman year to the end of freshman year.

The second volume is the summer vacation of freshman year to the start of junior year.

The upper and lower parts of the third volume are of the atmosphere. Of course, it may be directly divided into the third volume and the fourth volume. Please read the length at that time. The upper part is the first semester of junior year, and the lower part is from the winter vacation of junior year to before graduation from senior year.

The fourth volume is after the two graduated.

My style is to write it in full if you want to write it. Since I have written in college, of course I will finish it all in four years.
To be continued...