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199. The porridge painting workshop is actually Sister Su!?(2/2)

Xun Liang's ears were very sharp. When he heard Jiang Miao's movement, he immediately poked his head out: "Brother Jiang! Pork chop rice and Coke!"

"I may not come back immediately after dinner."

"It's okay! Whenever you come back, you'll bring me one!"

"Okay." Jiang Miao shrugged and had no choice but to accept the dog's entrustment.

Walking out of the dormitory and going down the stairs, Jiang Miao was still thinking about the barrage he had seen asking if the up was senior sister Su.

Then he hesitated a little again, whether to remind her senior sister that she is at risk of being exposed now.

However, Su Huaizhou still doesn't know about it. My junior has known her Bet account for a long time, and even secretly watch her live broadcast.

If I confessed to my senior, I don’t know if my senior will die in the club. Anyway, Jiang Miao is probably dead.

During the period when he went downstairs, Jiang Miao thought about it and thought he would forget it.

The previous barrage was probably the senior sister's classmate. When I heard the sound, I felt it looked like it, so I became suspicious, but I shouldn't be sure yet.

Besides, it's just a live broadcast, so it's no big deal.

Who can’t have a side job for young people nowadays?

The president of a certain country can still be a maid, but what happened to the senior sister just drawing a painting in her spare time?

Compared to Jiang Miao's previous experience of social death, the senior sister is not worth mentioning.

Not to mention that people may just ask casually, and they won’t go into it even if they don’t answer. How many people can really find out the bottom line?

Although Su Huaizhu has more fans at Bizhang now, she is still far from being around tens of thousands of fans.

There are so many people across the country, how could it be seen by an acquaintance in the same school?

Jiang Miao shook his head, feeling that things were not that coincidental.

After going downstairs, I came to the door of the dormitory building. After waiting for a while, Su Huaizhu on the opposite side also came out.

Now the two of them are no longer shy and nervous when they held hands when they first started to be in love.

When they met naturally, the hands of the two people were compatible and held each other easily, and walked towards the cafeteria while chatting.

"How much is the outline of the new book?" Su Huaizhou asked with his junior's hand.

"I just simply planned the veins for the time being." Jiang Miao yawned, "It's still early."

"What is the vein?"

"It's the main line of a book and the nodes of several climax plots." Jiang Miao explained briefly, "The new book is nothing more than three lines, emotional line, career line, and social deadline."

"Then determine what things that readers think are the most interesting will happen on these three lines, and the picture or plot that can arouse the readers' emotions to the greatest extent."

"Slowly accumulate these things, and then reverse the outline based on the accumulated climax plot, and add little by little to the early preparation and foreshadowing that promotes the climax."

"It sounds so troublesome." Su Huaixiang sighed, "This is how you wrote this book?"

"How is that possible?" Jiang Miao looked helpless, "The outline of this book is quite immature and not so organized. People always need to make progress slowly."

Jiang Miao had a sudden idea in the book "Up Master" and thought of the theme of Bizhan, and felt that it had potential to be tapped. In addition, the light novel published a pretty good love article at that time, which made Jiang Miao feel that this theme could be written.

So that start.

Basically, as soon as he wrote it out at the beginning, Jiang Miao communicated with the editor and released it. At first, there was no outline at all, but he simply determined how many episodes of the videos were used as material, and opening word was done.

It was not until a while before it was released, that Jiang Miao gradually improved the follow-up outline, but this also led to the average pace of the book being published, which was too fast in the early stage, and the emotional line in the middle and late stages had basically reached its end.

In order to avoid this problem in the new book, Jiang Miao plans to put more effort into the plot.

"I've gradually understood the deeper things in online literature now." Jiang Miao said this and felt a little emotional. "To put it bluntly, this thing is actually a bad information."

"Why can the protagonist feel good when playing a pig and eating a tiger? It is because there is an information gap between the protagonist, the supporting role and the villain."

"The larger the information difference, the stronger the feeling of pleasure will be at the moment when the information difference is released, which is commonly known as the moment of slapping the face."

"But the information gap is not just about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger."

"Any plot that can create information gaps and make readers expect, hoping to see the moment when the information gap is released can be written into an online article."

"For example, I want to write a love article based on us as a template for the new book. In the early stage, the senior sister knew that I was Mitao Jiang, but I didn't know that the senior sister knew that I was Mitao Jiang, but it was just a layer of information that was poor, so she could write it, and it was a big highlight."

Su Huaizhou was a little dizzy when she heard this and shook her head: "Then it seems that there is no such information in this book, right? The male and female protagonists are just in love."

"Isn't there really?" Jiang Miao smiled, "Actually, there are, but I didn't realize it before."

"I set the male lead Chen Wen as a straight man, but at first it was just to delay the relationship between the male and female lead."

"But in fact, the male protagonist's straight mind thinks that the relationship cannot be too fast, and often cannot get the female protagonist's affection. The female protagonist can take the initiative to attack every time. In fact, every attack is to fill in the information gap in the male protagonist's heart, so that he knows that it is OK to do this."

"It's OK to hug, it's OK to kiss, it's OK to touch."

"This is the process of gradually filling in the information gap between couples."

"At the beginning, the two of them fell in love, and they didn't know what the other party's bottom line and acceptance of intimate actions were."

"When the two old couples patted their butts and knew the next position, the information gap would be gone and there would be nothing to write."

"Yes." Su Huaizhou didn't understand much, but he still happily patted Jiang Miao's shoulder, "My younger brother has hope for Platinum in the future!"

Jiang Miao: "...Senior sister, don't breastfeed me casually."

Walking into the cafeteria, the two of them sat down in the seat by the window with their dining plates.

While eating, Jiang Miao's cell phone suddenly rang.

I took it out and saw it was my dad’s phone number.

Jiang Miao looked strange and a little nervous, thinking, dad, you dare to look for me on your own initiative?

I haven't settled the score with you before when you backstung me!

Thinking of this, Jiang Miao brewed his anger and answered the phone. As a result, Jiang Zhenguo on the opposite side was confused by a word.

"When did you get married?"

On the other end of the phone, Jiang Zhenguo's very puzzled voice came over.
Chapter completed!
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