147. In the name of taking material(1/2)
Su Huaizhu went to the bedroom to find clothes. After searching for more than twenty minutes, he had not come back yet.
Jiang Miao was waiting in the guest bedroom, waiting for the senior sister to come back while being in the group.
As a result, after so long, there was no movement next door, Jiang Miao suddenly became confused.
The senior sister wouldn’t have agreed verbally and then hid in the bedroom and regretted it?
Thinking of this, Jiang Miao immediately abandoned the readers in the book friend group and stood up and walked towards the master bedroom.
Without opening the door rashly, Jiang Miao knocked on the bedroom door and asked, "Senior sister, have you not found the Hanfu?"
"Ah...ah?" Su Huaizhou's blank voice came out, and he immediately explained hurriedly, "No! Wait a little longer! It'll be fine soon!"
"Then I'll wait for you in the living room." Jiang Miao said, then walked to the sofa and sat down, intending to wait for a while.
Anyway, it's only less than nine o'clock now, and it's still early to close at 10:30, so there's no hurry.
So Jiang Miao simply took out his mobile phone, clicked on the APP that he usually wrote out the outline, and planned to sort out some detailed outlines of the subsequent plot.
To be honest, when he first opened the book, after confirming the subject matter was Bee Station + Dog Food, he felt that the plot should be easy to write.
After all, he doesn’t need to think about the video content himself. If you have ready-made materials from the up owner, it is considered an alternative entertainment article.
Then, based on the most common three-act plot structure, control the plot and rhythm.
But now, Jiang Miao knew that he was still too young.
Because traditional urban literature and daily dog food literature have very different writing styles.
When writing daily dog food articles, as long as the heroine doesn’t appear in a chapter, the story will be sprayed by readers because they are here to eat dog food when they read this book.
Readers do not have the patience to watch the plot related to your preview video, including the villain slap in the face that traditional entertainment literature should have, which are points that need to be avoided in daily literature.
Of course, there are still books that can combine traditional entertainment and dog food, regulate their respective proportions and reasonably control the plot.
For example, "My Wife is the Queen of the Music World".
For example, "This Star comes from Parallel Time and Space".
All are good examples.
However, Jiang Miao's current writing skills obviously cannot support the career line and the emotional line in both directions, cooperate and promote each other, and ensure that they do not collapse.
Whenever he sees his backend orders of more than 4,000 yuan, Jiang Miao will always be complacent.
But when he opened the books of those big guys, chapter by chapter, saw the foreshadowing of clues, the exquisite and seductive preparation, and then the emotional outburst of orgasm, he realized his limitations.
It is a desire to make progress.
For text creators, the pictures and plots in their minds are often wonderful.
But the ability to express words is limited.
In other words, the creator's ability to express himself is limited.
If a person's mind can score 100 points.
After falling to the end of the pen to form the text, there are probably only 60 points left.
Then it is passed to the readers' minds in the form of words, and after forming a new picture, there may be only 20 points left.
Therefore, the author's recognition of the plot is often very different from that of the readers.
The difference here lies in the ability to express words.
This idea is worthless.
The skill that an author can truly live with, and what he can rely on to eat until old age is his ability to express his words.
To put it abstractly, it can be writing style, writing style, writing skills, or more specific preparation, the use of foreshadowing, and the understanding of grass snake and gray lines.
It can also be a metaphor that points out the topic or fits the situation, a simple but consistent joke, or a joke that makes people laugh and enhances the sense of substitution.
All of this, combined, is the author's weapon and the guarantee for maintaining the efficiency of content transmission.
The only thing the author has to do is to convey the things in his mind to the readers' minds as completely and clearly as possible through the words.
So that the 100-point plot can be received by readers through the original text in an authentic way.
Jiang Miao is still far from reaching this level.
Being able to write a fine book of daily literature can be said to be his luck, and he happened to encounter a subject that would make him more likely to maintain his writing ability.
This is also the reason why many authors fail in their transformation.
Because an author is in a subject, his expression ability may be extremely strong.
But if you change the subject, you may become a newbie and cannot exert your ability to express your writing.
So much so that the plot that they think is wonderful is exhausted during the transmission of text, and readers are unable to receive the excitement they deserve.
Jiang Miao is still very self-aware of this.
He knew his path was still long.
Even if the grades are good, they are even better than many old authors.
But this is far from enough. We still need to continue learning and progress to ensure that he will never fall behind in his future creative path.
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But Jiang Miao, who was immersed in revising the detailed outline and self-examination, did not know that Su Huaizhu in the bedroom was once again in a dilemma.
Looking at the three sets of Hanfu spread out on the bed, Su Huaizhu bit her lips, her face blushing and distressed.
Of course, she couldn't find Hanfu, she even found three sets.
But just like the last time I found JK uniforms, these three sets of Hanfu... In fact, they can no longer be called Hanfu...
Although the fabric and pattern imitate ancient Hanfu, in terms of style and cutting, Hanfu will never be as good as the three sets on the bed...
Su Huaizhou covered her face and threw herself on the bed, and her long legs swayed and blew hard beside the bed, venting her shame and annoyance.
Why didn't she remember it just now?!
The Hanfu I bought before are all the types that cannot be worn for people to see!
Today's industry trends always prevent people from wearing too many clothes.
But in order to pass the review, the person in charge of art can only try every means to play the edge.
And clothes like Hanfu that look quite conservative have been modified to create many astringent versions.
For example, the first bright yellow Hanfu on the left hand of Su Huaizhu is a large hollow on the back, extending to the point where the tailbone is faintly exposed.
If the figure is slightly thinner and the fabric is looser, it will easily leak light.
For example, the light blue Hanfu in the middle, don’t look at the long hem, put it on behind your body until your heels.
But in fact, the hem of the skirt can only cover the right half, and the left half is cut all the way, revealing a whole white long legs, and even seeing the skin on the slender waist.
The pure white Hanfu on the far right is even more excessive. Not only is the hem of the skirt almost so short that it is invisible, there is no fabric at the side waist, but it is just connected with a tie rope.
When Su Huaizhou saw this Hanfu, she remembered the female character she had painted at the beginning, and two red clouds suddenly appeared on her face.
At the beginning, she was so ashamed that she had never shared her good friend Tao Jiang.
After all, the painting is really too awkward.
But that was just a matter of the second dimension, but now she had to wear such aggravated clothes in the third dimension.
And I have to wear it for my junior!
He also needs to draw materials and write them into the novel!
Thinking of this, Su Huaizhu suddenly felt very regretful.
I regret not asking for a few more awkward male character Oswear clothes for that game company.
Otherwise, she would be a loss like this.
...
Jiang Miao didn't know Su Huaizhu's entanglement.
I only knew that when the bedroom door opened and the senior sister walked out of the inside, her brain was blank.
Of course, Su Huaizhu did not choose the most revealing pure white Hanfu, but hesitated to choose between light blue and bright yellow.
Finally, I chose the light blue Hanfu.
After all, when she was wearing a JK uniform last time, her long legs had been seen by her junior.
This time, the light blue Hanfu only exposes one leg. Although it can be exposed to the waist, it is better than exposing the back.
"Roll, is it okay?" Su Huaizhou pretended to be generous and walked to Jiang Miao, but tried hard to pinch the corner of her skirt and suppress her desire to circle.
After all, if you turn this kind of skirt in circles, everything will be exposed.
But even so, Jiang Miao still felt his breathing stagnant when he looked at the senior sister wearing a light blue Hanfu.
"It looks good." Jiang Miao can only say that.
Although there are many beautiful and moving words in my mind, when it comes to it, they can only highlight the limitations of the text.
To be continued...