Chapter 3319 Can you tell the truth?
He is about to reach sixty years old and start a business again. He has no energy or physical strength. The most important thing is not to make money, but to educate his six children well and prevent them from going on the wrong path.
Therefore, investment and financial management are the most convenient and fastest way. Not only can you achieve asset appreciation, but you can also avoid shortage of money for the rest of your life.
Turn off the computer and go to checkout with the card.
Two dollars in half an hour, four dollars in two computers, twenty deposit, and sixteen changes.
When I came back, I passed by the vegetable market and bought watermelon, some fresh meat and wonton wrappers, and ate wontons at night.
Bai Wenli woke up from a nap and got down from the upper floor. She saw her novels placed on the table. She thought that her mother and stepfather hadn't read them at all, and she was discouraged.
When he walked up to him, Bai Wenli saw red handwriting on it.
Bai Wenli was very surprised. Do you really need to modify it for her?
Bai Wenli took out the novels and read them carefully one by one, especially the places marked with red pens. At first, she didn't think that her mother and stepfather could have constructive comments, but after careful consideration, Bai Wenli realized what she lacked.
Some places were all selected when she saw it; some places were very nice, especially the description of people's service and character descriptions, but they were denied by their mother and stepfather.
She was very dissatisfied!
Bai Wenbin was not very good at appreciating skills. He took the manuscript and came down from the upper floor and said to Bai Wenli: "Second sister, can I tell the truth?"
He has read many novels before, especially martial arts novels, which are his favorites. The moves and the protagonist's grievances and hatreds are very substituted, but the novels written by his second sister have no desire to continue reading, and there is no sense of substitute.
Bai Wenli rolled her eyes, "Failure is the mother of success. As readers, you give me advice from the readers' perspective."
Bai Wenbin first pointed to a long paragraph of description, "I know that you want to highlight the beauty of the heroine in this paragraph, but I think it's too complicated, so I can just sweep it away. The plot behind it is slow, it's obviously a martial arts novel, you're writing it hard, anyway, I'll read the previous two chapters, and I can't read it later and fall asleep."
Bai Wenli's face turned slightly red when she heard this, "Oh, I really wrote poorly. Three novels were rejected and a few poems were rejected. I really don't have the talent to write. Then I will give up. I like it and can't be used as a meal. When I was in school, I still have the qualifications to be willful, but when I graduate, I can't even support myself. Wouldn't I have to support my parents?"
Seeing Bai Wenli's disappointed look, Bai Jingxuan turned his wheelchair and approached Bai Wenli, "Second Aunt, don't be discouraged. Who is born to write novels? It takes practice, and practice makes perfect. You can get into such a good university, which proves that you have strong learning ability and sufficient knowledge reserves. Now we have found out your shortcomings and corrected them, will you make progress?"
Bai Wenfang also quickly encouraged her. She knew that her second sister liked novels very much. When she was in school, she could save one-third of the money she had for lunch every day and rented novels to read. She was afraid that her parents would know about it, so she hid in bed and read it.
I used to like reading novels, but now I change it to like writing novels. Since I like it, she doesn’t want my second sister to give up.
Chapter completed!