Everything came to an abrupt end.

The warmth between readers and authors is torn apart, and we usher in a bloody era.

There are too many points in this plot that readers cannot accept.

The first one is abruptness. In order to create impact, I deliberately made a sudden stroke in the tragic aftertaste of Xiao Shu's death. Jiang Wang was sneak-attacked in the plot, and readers outside the plot were also sneak-attacked.

The second one is emotion. There are two aspects emotionally. One is that the sneak attacker is Lin Zhengren, a character that readers hate extremely. He has long been left behind by the protagonist. A character who should no longer be on the same level is bitten like a poisonous snake.

Give the protagonist a bite,

Another one is that the person who attacked Jiang Wang was Du Yehu, the second brother who cried outside Maplewood City for three days. This is the most emotionally uncomfortable point for readers.

Even in order to maintain this abruptness and doubt, except for the sentence in the battle: "Jiang Wang treated this battle with the utmost calmness. He knew that he could not make mistakes in every step. Any mistake could cause regrets in this life.

!], except for the conversation between Du Yehu and Jiang Wang about wine.

I didn't make any further hints.

This is indeed difficult to alleviate readers' emotions, so I understand all readers' incomprehension.

As for the combat power that many people like to talk about, it is actually irrelevant. The inner palace and the outer building are the two realms most prone to over-level damage, not to mention that Jiang Wang has been blocked from early warning. The military formation is another book

It has been emphasized many times that it is clear that conventional power can surpass the extraordinary level. Jiang Wang and Zhongxuan Sheng were able to kill outer buildings with flying dragons on the battlefield of Yang Kingdom. Isn't that the military formation they relied on?

Du Yehu brought Zhuang Kingdom's most elite Jiujiang Xuanjia, and with advance intelligence targeting, sneak attacks, Lin Zhengren's layout, formations, and Yi Shengfeng's shielding and warning capabilities, he had every possibility of harming Jiang Wang.

At least that's the case from the character's perspective.

Then why do I still write this?

Because Zhuang Gaoxian's character logic determines that he will definitely take action after the arrival of God Zhu Weiwo, and he will definitely take action against the Unredeemed City.

The fact that Zhuang Guo wants to pull out the Unredeemed City has nothing to do with Jiang Wang. The oppression he endured is even just a casual thing. If he passes by, it will definitely happen.

And as you know, this is another time Jiang Wang is powerless.

He must restrain himself, restrain his anger, restrain his hatred, restrain his eagerness, and move forward with determination, silence, and steadfastness as he has always done.

In my plot line, this is the last moment when I feel like a god.

Because next, I will set off the climax of the entire Battle of Xia.

Jiang Wuqi's death at the beginning of the volume has already pointed to Fa Xia at the end of the volume!

All accumulated emotions must be released in this part.

A series of challenges on the way back to Qi, with three purposes.

The first is to put the final touches on Jiang Wangliang’s sword to the world.

Second, it relieves readers’ depressed emotions.

Third, give a rough description of the current world and outline it so that it can be filled in later. After all, they haven’t appeared much in such a long time.

On the general stage, Jiang Wang stood up to fight with Chong Xuanzun.

Everyone can already see that the clear main line of this volume is Jiang Wang's path and the journey of God's arrival.

Deep in Yuheng, there is Lixin Building.

In the realm of mountains and seas, Licheng character building.

Outside the city without redemption, a building named Ren was built.

In the western suburbs of Linzi, there is a Wuzi Tower.

So we have established the Four Virtues to restrain ourselves, we have the ape that calms our mind, the horse that lowers our mind, we have the ability to realize the emptiness, and we have the path to the true self.

When we get to the chapter "The Monkey that calms the mind, the horse that surrenders the mind, and the enlightenment of the sky", the plot line about the road is wrapped up in one fell swoop. But this is not the climax that this volume should have, so I have to stop and move on.

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Here, the biggest conflict in the novel was triggered so far.

I found that there is a fundamental difference in concept between me and many readers, that is, I don’t think the protagonist’s loss to Zhongxuan Zun is [inhibition] at all, and many readers are fundamentally angry about this.

Later, I thought about this issue repeatedly, and I felt that perhaps the biggest problem lies in the difference in perspective between the author and the reader.

In the layout of my story, Jiang Wang's journey has come to an end when he reaches the point of calming the ape, surrendering the mind, and becoming enlightened.

His battle with Chongxuanzun was a corner of the entire Faxia campaign and the first step in the battlefield battle between Chongxuansheng and Chongxuanzun.

In my opinion, this is the chess game of Shengzun. Chongxuan beats Jiang Wang, and has the disadvantage of losing a pawn first. And because of Chongxuanzun’s always invincible appearance, Jiang Wang has not been able to catch up yet.

I think this is reasonable and harmless.

The first time Jiang Wang and Chong Xuanzun met, Chong Xuanzun didn’t even look at Jiang Wang!

After the master's ceremony, Zhongxuanzun noticed this person.

After the meeting of the Yellow River, Chongxuan Zuncai paid attention to this person.

When it came to the battle for the vanguard, he had to achieve the Divine Presence in order to stabilize his position.

The growth trajectory along the way is clearly visible.

But in the feeling of many readers, Jiang Wang has been building momentum all the way, and he should win over Zhongxuan Zun at Dianjiangtai in order to be able to vent his emotions.

And I think that holding on to the road is already cathartic, and the real climax I want is still to come.

One thing I have to admit is

When it comes to writing, I am stubborn, egotistical, and unreasonable. Most of the time, I don't know the readers' feelings. But I think the structure of the work is more important.

Of course, I know how great a climax it is to defeat Zhongxuanzun in front of thousands of troops, which is no less than a reenactment of the meeting of the Sword Immortal on the Yellow River. The eagerness of the readers during that period also reminded me very clearly of what the readers were expecting and what they wanted.

Of course I know how much that will improve business results.

There is even such a scene dialogue in my detailed outline. It was said by Chongxuan Zun to Wang Yiwu after the Battle of Zunwang. The line is: "In the Outbuilding Realm, I can no longer suppress him...

…”

But in the end I didn't write this scene or this sentence.

Because when I was writing, I felt that Zhong Xuan Zun’s character would not say such a sentence. And in the battle of Faxia, I didn’t think there should be any dialogue scenes between Chong Xuan Zun and Wang Yiwu.

So it was erased.

First, let’s talk about why there is a plot of fighting for the vanguard.

First, let’s take on the role of Chongxuan Zun. What is his layout style? Just like his path is to cut off the delusion, he also likes to get straight to the root of his moves. Unlike Chongxuan Sheng, he can use dazzling layouts and knows how to do it bit by bit.

He leveraged the situation and formed a general trend. He always used the general trend to overwhelm others and go straight to Huanglong.

For example, as soon as Jixia Academy came out, it first became a Tianfu Outer Building, and then fought against three, focusing on preparing for the Yellow River Meeting. It did not compete with Zhongxuan Sheng on business matters at all.

For example, on the battlefield of the Conquest of Xia, after he was tricked by Zhongxuan Sheng, he went to Daye Mansion and killed the Emperor of Daxia without saying a word.

The same was true for him at the beginning of the expedition to Xia. His strength was strong and strong in all aspects. He relied on this to fight for the vanguard and overwhelm the power of Xuan Sheng and Jiang Wang in front of thousands of troops.

This is his consistent character logic.

What is the logic of Jiang Wang’s character?

If it was for himself to fight for fame and fortune, to show off for himself, he would not play.

Chongxuanzun suppressed Zhongxuansheng until he became dull, so he wanted to stand out!

This is why this battle took place.

Readers are actually aware of the gap in their hard power at this time. From the end of January to the end of March, countless readers discussed it countless times and did many battle deductions. It is generally clear that Jiang Wang cannot be defeated, so

There is no need to elaborate on this.

Finally, there is the Battle of Faxia.

In the Battle of Zhuang Yong, Jiang Wang's fight against Zhuang Chengqian was the main plot, so that battle was only briefly mentioned.

The Battle of Qiyang was a devastating one, and Jiang Wang's main point of view was only a glimpse in the battlefield.

Before the summer expedition this time, I told the alliance group that I would not avoid this war and that I would write about a truly extraordinary war.

How difficult would it be to write a truly supernatural war?

The situation of the world, the two countries' courts, civil servants and generals, soldiers, and common people...

Public opinion, diplomacy, intelligence, battle formations, fighting with real swords and guns...

So far, I have not seen any truly extraordinary war.

The individual strength of extraordinary monks makes many tactics in human history meaningless.

When an individual's strength is enough to change the situation of the war, it is difficult for the war to be exciting.

Why attack halfway across the river and freeze the entire river with a spread of Taoist skills?

There is no more poisonous weapon than water or fire...

Samadhi and true fire are often ridiculed. What does water and fire mean?

Of course there are clever ways to write it.

For example, in the end, because the author ran out of energy, he chose to abbreviate that Tian Anping killed eight thousand people and killed the real person with 90,000 lives. With just this description, his madness and power can be felt by the readers.
To be continued...