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Fan Qingfeng knew very well that martial arts were no second, and literary arts were no first.
But as long as the level gap is large enough, it can still be compared.
Comparison is to compare in all aspects.
Come on, compare the cover first.
He is a cartoon girl wearing an exotic school uniform, decaying and incredible style.
I have a yellowed base, black brush calligraphy, which shows grandeur and profound charm.
The two are put together, and the highest and the lowest are immediately debated.
The cover must be my strongest.
Compare the word count again.
"The Evil Young Master of Drawing the Flag", 112,000 words.
"Fallen and Rebirth", 91,000 words.
Um……
It's comparable.
I'm more than enough to make up for his word count with quality.
Word count, draw.
Then there is the number of comments.
Me, 1985.
He, 203.
Ha ha.
The grades are just ten times worse.
As for collection, you can't see the specific number, you can only see the milestone record. "The Evil Young Master of Flag" will only exceed 10,000 three days ago.
This is also five times faster.
No, children still can't.
After such a comparison, Fan Qingfeng's heart finally became more self-consistent.
Then he calmly opened the latest chapter of "The Evil Young Master of Drawing the Flag".
This time, he has done enough psychological construction.
No matter what a wild dog wants to express, whether it is good or bad, whether it is right or wrong, the text will be filled with ambiguous soft porn.
I have to feel how his readers went astray.
Click to open the chapter, as expected!
【…】
[In the school corridor, Makoto Ito frowned.]
【This is the third time that Hanako Asakusa has expressed that she wants to spend the night at his house.】
[As a recognized beauty, the biggest impression of boys about her is that they are sexy.]
[She is the kind of girl who is rare and can be regarded as a beauty in every part of her body.]
[Because it can satisfy everything, she is also the fantasy object of many boys, or all boys have more or less engaged in various types of fantasies.]
[At this time, Hanakusa was blushing, she pulled her schoolbag on her back, and secretly showed a gap for Makoto Ito.]
【Ito Makoto clearly saw that there were various stockings inside, even hemp ropes and whips…】
"Dispair!!!" Fan Qingfeng screamed with his eyes full of light and slapped his head with a palm.
Wild dog, you have a few tricks.
Although it is an evil path, it is a very powerful one.
He couldn't wait to slid down.
[Asakusa Hanako confirmed that Ito Mako saw everything with her light, then she twisted her body and approached him little by little.]
["Ito, tonight... I have no one at home, so I'm really scared... If I could go to Ito's house to stay... in order to repay the young master's kindness for taking in..."]
[Asakusa said, gently grabbed the corner of her skirt, lifting it up one by one...]
【Just as the black edge is about to be revealed…】
["Asakusa!! Please respect yourself!!"]
[The boy's upright roar resounded throughout the teaching building.]
【Ito Makoto stared at Asakusa Hanako and said word by word:】
["I Ito Makoto came to school because I wanted to receive education and become a useful person to society."]
【“Can you not disturb my studies?”】
["Same as Asakusa. If you are determined to make extra money by doing this kind of thing, you might as well drop out of school and go to a custom shop to work."]
["Now you are not only wasting the funds of the education province and the taxes of the people, but also poisoning all students!"]
["Boys are unintentional to learn because of you, and girls are completely ruined because of you!"]
["Black Sheep, get out of Yinglan High School!!"]
Dong.
Fan Qingfeng's mobile phone fell to the ground.
He was completely stunned.
Or, being shocked.
This character...this speech...
Very... very... very... very...
Very fucking powerful...
It's simply deafening!
Even I didn't react.
At that time, my thoughts were still immersed in the fantasy behind me.
Suddenly, I was hit by a blow!
It is very educational, even I am obsessed with it.
I have to admit that during the reading process, my mentality became degenerate...
But the Wild Dog's words are just to slap your face while you are psychedelic.
etc……
I see……
It is to suppress first and then rise! The limit is reversed!
First use vulgar plots to attract readers, and then make a big reversal criticism.
Something is a little bit.
Wild dogs have something to do.
While Fan Qingfeng put down his phone, a golden light flashed in his eyes.
Realized.
I see.
The straight preaching is lacking in progress, transformation and transition, and readers will find it hard and find it difficult to devote themselves to their emotions.
If there is no emotion, how can they listen to even if they are as smart as gold as themselves?
In a simple way, I first took a seductive plot, and when I saw it was about to fall into a evil path...
Suddenly injected into the soul of thought.
good!
Fan Qingfeng didn't even have breakfast, so he rushed to the desk.
Next chapter, there is!
In fact, Fan Qingfeng shouldn't have had such an epiphany.
Even if you only look down two lines, you will not realize this kind of thing.
[Looking at Asakusa who was crying and running away, watching her dancing around... that...]
【Ito Makoto's heart dripped blood.】
To be continued...