Fake connection from the last time (with the author's 800-word summary essay)(1/2)
Um……
Rewriting is OK.
Now I am considering whether to continue this book or to start from scratch with the reincarnation of the filthy land.
My friends and others (all very hardworking authors, unlike me) all support me in the reincarnation of the filthy land, but this seems a bit sorry for the readers who follow it.
I want to write and modify it along this book, but there must be changes in the number of words in the plot before and after, and it may be changed to the same thing as the four...
In addition, it is...
The reincarnation of the filthy land is about to find an editor... I am afraid.
A few confirmed places—
1. The setting of death rebirth is retained.
2. The game line task will tell the protagonist the details of the task when it is completed (note that you will know what the task is after completing the node task. You still need to explore during the task.)
3. The plot will basically not change. Adopt angels, admission, moving, sports festivals, four seasons clubs, kendo conferences, and subsequent kendo club training and Jade Dragon Banner. There will definitely be a gathering, kendo live, summer festivals afterwards...
Each plot event is determined before the book is opened, so there is no need to worry about any major changes.
4. The character's personality will not be changed, which is also one of the core contents of "Angel", and this will not be changed.
But the change in character in the first volume of Haruhino Chisaka may be shown in another way.
5. I will work hard to make the connection between plots, including the subsequent connection.
6. There are many foreshadowings and plots, and the previous arrangements are not appropriate enough, and perhaps it should be written more clearly... (Otherwise, a considerable number of people will determine that it was the author's mistake after seeing it, and do not think about why the author wants to write... The final result is that a considerable number of people do not read it, and some people may even leave messages in the paragraph to attack the author, and they may consider it as a poisonous point and criticize it.)
Please trust the author...thank you very much!
7. Shiina Miyo, Fukaya Akihashi, and Yayoi Oda will not be deleted.
Although there are too many characters appearing in the first volume, there are also solutions - just reduce the length appropriately and pay attention to the readers' hearts.
ps: My character card is getting faster and I shouldn't have so many character cards. The protagonist and supporting role must be selected and cannot be hidden...
If it is the reincarnation of the Immortal Land, I will probably only display the character cards of Asagawa Yu, Asagawa Yuki, and Haruhino Chisaka in the first two volumes, which are on the shelves.
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This week I was really busy... Today I even reached 20,000 steps...
And my mind is full of all kinds of things during the day and I can't write them out at night.
(Before July came to Qidian to write this book, he worked full-time, stayed at home all day long to write, and asked for leave whenever he had something to do... It can be said that his resistance to troubles is 0.)
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Below is the beginning of another scrap manuscript from the author who applied for the previous leave note, just ignore it.
(They are all void manuscripts that have not been published, but they should not give up on the settings in them, and they may be published one day.)
(perhaps……)
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Zhong Sheng lay on the bed dyingly, closing his eyes weakly.
His hair was gray and his face was old. His life span was exhausted. He immediately left.
All kinds of pictures of the past century kept flashing in my mind, like a revolving lantern before my death.
...
At the age of three, I had a memory and grew up eating a hundred families in a village.
When I was five years old, I ran to the river to play with water, climbed to a crooked tree that was tilted to the center of the river, and fell down and almost drowned.
The nine-year-old village was destroyed. He hid in an empty rice jar in the basement and played hide-and-seek, and was lucky enough to escape. When he came out, he was taken away by an old Taoist.
When he brought him to the Qixian Sect, the old Taoist accepted him as his eldest disciple, and the two of them depended on each other for their own life.
Fortunately, the peaks are getting along well on the surface, and the basic cultivation resources have never been deducted, so the practice is still smooth.
At the age of ten, he entered the first level of Qi training and was dedicated to seeking Tao under the guidance of his master.
He has never gone down the mountain within a hundred years, but he has never broken through the realm and has successfully built the foundation.
Until today, when he died a hundred years ago, he was still an ordinary Qi training man of the ninth level of Qi training, and he was in vain to give his master's expectations.
Or if the master saw it, he was not a good source of immortal cultivation.
"Sheng'er..."
The old Qingming Taoist, who is over a thousand years old, is still energetic now, with black hair and looking at his only disciple, with regret on his face.
I had something to say in my heart, but I hesitated for a while and never spoke.
As early as when he took in Zhong Sheng, he knew that his disciple was ordinary and that he was destined to go far in his cultivation, but he felt sorry for him at that time...
Now that the old man gives away the young man, it is a result he has already expected.
But I didn't expect it to be a hundred years earlier than he thought...
"well……"
A long sigh came into Zhong Sheng's heart.
The revolving lantern continues.
Things that I experienced were played back in his mind.
Take care of the medicine garden on the mountain.
Chop wood, raise fish, cook, and run errands to the master.
...
Suddenly, memories passed through thousands of...
Suddenly, a picture that he shouldn't have appeared—
Walking in a city full of tall buildings, unfortunately dying under an out-of-control truck.
‘…’
Living in a world full of humanoid monsters, I made an engagement with the cat-ear monster and spent my whole life...
This is...his past life?
The picture keeps changing, three thousand times of the world, three thousand reincarnations.
One world after another that was completely different from the world of immortal cultivation today flashed through his mind.
Machinery, technology, humanities, history...
Finally, he returned to the world of immortal cultivation.
That life is completely different from this life. In that world, he has an unparalleled talent for cultivating immortals. He transforms into a god at a hundred years old and becomes an immortal after a thousand years of tribulation. At this point, he is unstoppable and has reached the highest position in the fairy world step by step and lives with the heavens...
But he was not satisfied with this. He lived for three thousand lives with the method of reincarnation, seeking a method to break through the limitations of the world, so as to be able to travel through all walks of life and master the ability to create the world.
...
The revolving lantern ended, and the scenes in my mind were far away from him.
The consciousness is silent and falls into chaos.
...
...
Click!
A sound of the door opening sounded, and a female monk broke in and ran to Zhong Sheng anxiously.
Practicing Qi and cultivating immortals also cultivates the body, so most of the people who cultivate immortals are handsome.
Most female monks also have beautiful faces and slim figures. But even fairies with their own strengths should be outstanding, standing out from the crowd, just like the bright moon and stars.
It’s like the one who suddenly broke into Zhong Sheng’s simple wooden house at this time…
Not only is he unparalleled in appearance, but his qualifications to cultivate immortals are also difficult for others to reach. He has reached the late stage of the Golden Elixir Realm in less than a hundred years old, and he can break the elixir and become a baby soon.
"This... Master Qingming! Senior Brother Zhong Sheng is still alive?"
She leaned over to Zhong Sheng, looked at the white hair and the peaceful old face with closed eyes, and asked Taoist Qingming who was standing aside with a somewhat anxious tone.
He put his slender hands on Zhong Sheng's wrist, and he didn't feel any pulse beating. He gritted his teeth slightly and simply pressed his side to his chest.
"This... Zhuyue? Why are you..."
The old Taoist Qingming was extremely confused, but he still sighed truthfully.
"Zhong Sheng's life span is over, and even if he still has a breath, it will be useless..."
The two have never seen each other in a century, not to mention that Qiu Zhuyue is one of the top three disciples in the sect, so she would never know Zhong Sheng, who is only at the ninth level of Qi training.
While talking, Qiu Zhuyue felt Zhong Sheng's faint heartbeat and immediately breathed a sigh of relief.
Immediately helped Zhong Sheng up, took off his cloth shoes, and sat cross-legged on the bed.
To be continued...