Chapter 005 Interesting new article
"This article uses purpose and narration to guide readers to explore the protagonist's actions layer by layer after repeated guessing and mistakes."
"The technique is very simple. It is a trick, a main line that leads to the end. It has some freshness but is not very novel in general. To be honest... this technique is used at the level of a high school student."
"But how do you say this article? The skills are so simple that they are almost straightforward, and there are no difficulties that are worth savoring. How come it is, it is..."
Editor Liu Yuqing added: "Even for a while, my mind will not be able to free up any other place except this article."
"Yes, yes, that's what it means."
Articles that are full of skills but lack the core of emotions mainly attract attention in the skills themselves.
After putting on the shell of suspense, you will only focus all your energy on how to solve the puzzle, and you will suddenly become enlightened the moment the article is completed and the mystery is solved.
Then, it came to an abrupt end.
After reading an article, it’s over. You can start reading the next article and pursue the next puzzle journey.
The education and literature that these editors came into contact with during their lifetimes are basically in this form.
Therefore, their thinking has almost all become inertia. As soon as they get the article, they start to check word by word, looking for clues revealed by the author in the article.
If the article itself is not logical and there are defects in the reasoning process, and the ending is directly forced after the ending cannot be completed, it will basically be judged as unqualified.
If the traces revealed in the article are too obvious and so straightforward that they can guess the general development process and ending at once, they can basically not be rated as superior.
"Female Dust" does not belong to the former, but it is also tempted on the brink of danger of the latter.
Shen Yu was not a writer who wrote suspense before. Once he was reborn, he asked him to write a suspense article, and he couldn't get started immediately.
If he was asked to skillfully move between various narrative tricks and make up a strange story, Shen Yu might choose to go directly to the construction site to pick up cement.
Although in this world, there may not even be cement.
Therefore, the first time he started writing "Dust" he used was quite simple and basically learned and sold on the spot.
Maybe readers who have never had much contact with narrative tricks before will applaud when they first read this type of article.
However, in this world, most people are already familiar with the writing style of using various techniques, and several editors are veterans who have read countless manuscripts.
Shen Yu's debut work is very consistent with his "high school student" in terms of skills.
As for other things...
Shen Yu was just a little unacceptable to the literary style of this world.
The articles he wrote will inevitably bring some personal touch, no matter how he intentionally approaches the world's writing style.
This personal color reflects more the theme of the article that Shen Yu received during his lifetime emphasized in the invincible nine-year compulsory education. The theme of this article is often accompanied by the author's strong personal feelings.
When an article has an emotional core, the completion of the article's main text does not mean the completion of the entire article.
It often brings a lot of emotional excitement, makes people think and makes people think.
If the skills of this world focus more on the article itself, then the emotional core focuses on the afterglow after the article is completed.
That's why these editors suddenly felt a little uncomfortable.
To describe it, it is like drinking a cocktail with a bland taste in a bar.
Originally, I didn't know why, and I even wanted to complain that this cocktail was not good, but I didn't know that before the words were finished, the cocktail's stamina was stunned.
"It's interesting." Editor Zhang touched his chin.
Editor-in-chief Liu Yuqing closed the projection: "I'm so sorry to read this article that I've 'wasted' your time."
Everyone is a colleague of many years. Although they will be so anxious that they blushed when they encounter serious business, they are still relatively relaxed and happy to get along with each other.
As soon as Liu Yuqing's words were closed, everyone couldn't help laughing, which was considered to be diverting attention and taking back their minds from the article.
Editor Zhang laughed heartily: "You are so petty, I'm arbitrary!"
The editor in the corner is a good candidate for the key points: "You just said that this was what you found in the magazine manuscript?"
Liu Yuqing nodded: "It was a manuscript from two days ago. It was submitted to the third floor for review. It was also marked as red. The editors who gave them to my subordinates would probably be confused."
Qingyun Club has collected manuscripts from new talents in the world, so it is naturally impossible for several editors in the office to look at them one by one. Often, many editors under the editor will be divided layer by layer.
The more you reach the lower level, the more dispersed the rights, the more fair the review is.
I was afraid that I wouldn't recognize gold and jade, so I was so rigorous that I reviewed the draft as Shen Yu's college entrance examination papers at that time.
The article "Female Dust" marked red means that the opinions given by the public review are very different.
This is a relatively rare situation, so he was urgently handed over to the desk of editor Liu Yuqing, asking him to put down his thoughts about Qingyun List and come to take a look at the magazine's submissions.
Liu Yuqing: "Do you think this manuscript can be included in our magazine?"
The office was quiet for a while, and then it exploded like cold water splashed into a hot oil pan.
"It is indeed a bit special to read if you don't deny this article, but its ambiguousness is also obvious. Our magazine collects submissions to newcomers in the literary world, not those of newcomers in writing."
"A newbie writing article? You are a veteran, please write a post like this for me to see? Our magazine is seeking newness for the literary world. This newness is not necessarily a newcomer, but also has various novel and pioneering thinking. Although this manuscript is immature, I think it is novel enough and worth a look with you."
"What to see at a glance? You can see at a glance! No skills! It's straightforward and simple! The record!"
"Will you keep memorizing about the record for so long? Why is it that the family is short of money or is it that my sister-in-law is strict with her?"
"I tell you Lao Wang, this is talking about work. Don't rely on your surname Wang Tiantian and my sister-in-law..."
"What are you talking about?" A cry of peace covered all the noises in the office. Everyone who recognized who was the sound of this quieted down for a moment.
The editor-in-chief closed the door slowly: "I heard you whispering from a distance, what happened?"
Liu Yuqing put out the projection again: "We didn't quarrel, we were just discussing the issue of choosing a manuscript."
"Just that manuscript that was marked as red?"
The editor-in-chief obviously knew about this manuscript, and his expression of looking up at the projection in the air was no different from the way Shen Yu looked at the head of the college entrance examination marking group that year.
"Send it."
Chapter completed!