Chapter 045 Begin to doubt myself
However, what Chen Yu didn't know was that the more educated people were, the more cruel they would be.
If Chen Yu was in the office at that time, the group would have been unable to reach an agreement later. It was just an ordinary article but it was rising higher and higher.
So much so that the old professors who began to consider the past saints and later generations were filled with righteous indignation and would probably scold him to the point of autism.
However, Professor Bai Lunyue has become a bit fence-skinned in this view storm.
Specifically, he still disagrees with Chen Yu's writing style.
But I really appreciate Chen Yu's attitude of pursuing progress. After all, the second version is a clear improvement that can be seen from the naked eye.
Perhaps in the eyes of those of them, this version still has many shortcomings.
But think about it calmly, according to what Dean Chen Xun said before, Chen Yu is just a senior high school student, and Bai Lunyue feels that he is already very good at being able to do this.
At least he had written a therapy article at a young age, and countless people had been working hard for a lifetime but could not touch that threshold.
The students he was taught by his own men sometimes handed in papers, and he was so angry that he couldn't sleep at three o'clock in the middle of the night to revise the manuscript.
There are only a handful of people who can write therapeutic essays.
This has nothing to do with how profound this person’s academic cultivation is, it is more like a kind of spiritual energy, the kind that God can enjoy.
But then again, the articles written by Shen Yu must still object to them.
He is optimistic about the articles written by Chen Yu, who has been constantly improving, rather than the bucket of paste he has written now.
When facing things you like, people often have plenty of energy.
Those who like to read can stay up late, those who like to play games can stay up all night. Those who devote themselves to academics are willing to wait for dawn.
Chen Yu has been preparing for so long and has written so many days, and the number of articles is insignificant. The scholars are talking about these articles, and not only are they pragmatic and practical, but the large amount of debates has also slowed down the progress.
Although there are energy supplements now to improve the body's physical excitation, it will not make people sleepy and have poor mindset.
But as time goes by, the exact same story is told so many times, and after watching it for a long time, I always feel a little tired.
Dean Chen Xun naturally saw that everyone was tired, but he couldn't let everyone go so simply.
Just like the end of each chapter of the article, a small suspense is set to arouse readers' interest in reading the next chapter.
If he cannot leave everyone with some thought on this article at this moment, and then this feeling of fatigue will be brought back to ferment, it will often give people a subconscious mind, and they will also regard this article as one of the reasons for boredom.
Subjective emotions are the most influencing people's judgment, which is not beneficial to subsequent discussions of views.
Dean Chen Xun pondered for a while, skipped the revised manuscript between the second and third editions, and directly sent the third edition to the teachers present.
"It's all this, I know everyone is exhausted. After reading this last manuscript, let's go to rest. The manuscript won't run here anyway, and our discussion won't be able to open your mouth tomorrow. Go back and digest it well, and it's better to have a rest."
Bai Lunyue was very energetic. He was not a problem for him to stay up late.
But he glanced at the professor who was sitting next to him and dozing off, and his eyes were almost unable to open.
I also know that if this continues, even if the progress advances, the quality of the discussion will probably drop significantly.
No one wants to see it with twice the result.
So no one raised an objection, and all clicked on the manuscript sent by Dean Chen Xun, who was responsible for the presidency and dispatched the manuscript order.
When I saw the beginning, almost 30% of the teachers present frowned.
Here comes again, the classic waste segment type.
What can a large amount of space describes the dilapidated appearance and the cleanliness of the house?
Is this a vague hint at the scene where the incident occurred?
But they remember that there were no dead people in this article, and no earth-shaking stories happened.
So what is the role of this paragraph at the beginning?
Make up the word count?
This is how hard I can’t think about it, so I started to make up the number of words.
Isn't he aware that doing so will directly ruin readers' interest in reading the entire article?
Keep reading below, why do you need to repeatedly describe the hand movements of the protagonist Aunt Wang?
Rubbing the corners of her clothes crampedly, rubbing her hands on her apron, and raising her hand to tie up the hair in her ears... What are the hints here? Is it because she has done something at this time, otherwise why does it make people feel so uneasy?
Nonsense, all nonsense.
If the overall story does not become a new one, then there is no need for these descriptions to be left behind.
A professor frowned: "Is it because I have read other articles before and learned the direction of the story, so I feel that there is no suspense when I continue reading it? The whole article is full of plain language, without any turn. After reading the previous sentence, I can guess the next sentence..."
There were also professors in the office who agreed.
Dean Chen Xun's eyes floated over the faces of these professors and said slowly: "The possibility you just said must be there, but there is another more important feature, you know what the following story is, why don't you put down the manuscript in your hand and continue reading it?"
The professor who had just spoken suddenly stopped his eyes, as if he had realized it later, and then he realized that he had seen the article neared the end.
Professor Luo clicked on the desktop: "It appeared again, the aura that came from nowhere is exclusive to Shen Yu's article. Even compared to the previous article "Female Dust", this article expresses that attractiveness is more vivid, so when I read this place, I felt a little uneasy for the protagonist in the article."
"Very proficient." Bai Lunyue searched through Guangming's "Female" written by Shen Yu before. "In comparison, he is very skilled in using this kind of spiritual energy, but he is a little unfamiliar with the basic writing of the article."
"Isn't this equivalent to learning to run before you learn to leave?"
Just like before calligraphers want to write their own fonts that can be passed down through later generations, they must learn other fonts, and be confident in extracting the essence and discarding the dross in order to innovate and achieve something.
The same is true for writing articles.
How can I write a story if I can’t even write a sentence smoothly?
If you can’t figure out the basic structure of the writing, how can you write the whole article smoothly?
But there is such a person whose articles are smooth and clear and can bring people a reading experience, but his writing style is so rough that he is so childish that his skills are so naive...
A professor suddenly sighed.
Chapter completed!